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Marjorie
Posted on: 2009/1/26 14:22
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Re: A POEM
Is it some kind of haiku?

I can't agree with the last 2 lines though.
1 million is hardly what you call a donation from one of the richest coundtry in the world.

and whose "huge cries" are these? The Japanese? Tha Gazan?

Aunty Doris
Posted on: 2009/1/24 13:06
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Re: A POEM
Donnie, I've been wrong on matters like this before, but I do think they call it "The Land of the Rising Sun".

Hate to be the bearer of more bad news but besides that, none of your poem appears to rhyme.

Here's a poetic picture though, bit of a consolation, just to take your mind off how things turned out on the poetry front.

doniv
Posted on: 2009/1/9 18:07
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A POEM
japan
land of rising yen
sinking morals
public self centered
donating to Gaza
huge cry.
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